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This story appeared in the January 2000 edition of Planet Relish and again in late 2002.  I thought it was fun -- and so did others. Here's a quote (with permission) from a review on  Bella On-Line:

If you haven't been making regular stops at Planet Relish, you've missed out on what might prove to be some instant classics. "Sub-Textual Evidence for the Existence of Alien Life and Extrapolation of Internet Protocols" by Lazette Gifford being one; "Bad Hair Days" (Paula Fleming) and "Brother Mac You are Healed" (Naomi Kritzer) being a couple more.

Donna McDougle

Bella On-Line

 

SUB-TEXTUAL EVIDENCE FOR THE EXISTENCE OF ALIEN LIFE
AND THE EXTRAPOLATION OF INTERNET PROTOCOLS

By

Lazette Gifford

 

I wasn't supposed to be there.  I should have been spending a romantic weekend with my fiancée -- former fiancée as of about an hour before -- but the planned tryst turned out to be a bad idea.  I took off from work a couple hours early and found Earl and his other girlfriend sunbathing, nude, by the pool.  And in rather close quarters.  There was, of course, a scene.  He yelled and I broke his nose and shoved the engagement ring so hard on his little finger they'd probably have to cut it off.

Then I got in my Jeep and headed for my desert home, far away from the busy metropolis of Barstow.  The sunset fell in an array of stark reds and unnatural purples as wild clouds blew fast over the open desert. I could see lightning strikes coming closer on my left.  Rain hit, leaving dusty trails of muck on my windshield.

I cursed the weather, Earl, and life in general. I wasn't exactly hysterical with grief over the unexpected demise of my engagement. I was,  I reluctantly admitted to myself,  relieved. In fact I was looking forward to spending some time alone for a change --

About a quarter mile ahead lightning struck to the left of the road, bounced twice, and rolled across the cement before stopping, half buried and glowing in the sand.

I stopped the car.  Going back to Earl suddenly didn't seem so bad after all.  Instead, I inched the Jeep forward. Just because there was a strange green glow didn't mean a plane hadn't crashed. Someone might need help.

When I saw the guy standing at the side of the road I believed it had been a plane. In the pouring rain I could see that he was tall and thin, with long, light colored hair.  Okay, so he was dressed a little strangely -- but hell, this is California.  I had seen people in skintight silver lamé and ankle length black cloaks before.

The car scared the hell out of him. He turned around and gave a little jump, stumbled and fell on his ass in the wet sand.  I got out and ran over to help him and that's when it finally, irrevocably became clear that things were out of whack. His eyes glowed when he looked up -- blue circles with little flashes of silver in them.  Gemstone colors caught in the reflection of the setting sun.  I took a step backward.

"Mew?"

A man -- or whatever -- that size should not make pitiful little --

"Meow."

-- tiny kitten sounds.

He was holding the kitten under the cloak, trying to shield the creature from the falling rain.  That was my undoing, of course.  Kittens.  I could never turn away a stray in need.

"Are... you all right?" I asked

"I..." he said looking up, blinking those bright eyes a couple times.  "I fell."

"Yes," I said glancing at the sky.  "Yes, you fell quite a long ways, I think.  Can I give you a lift somewhere?  In my car I mean.  Back to town or something."

Babbling.  I couldn't help it.

"I don't know where I am."

"Mew?"

"Come on.  Let's get you two out of the storm."

"We would be grateful."

I helped them into the car, and then sat behind the wheel in silence while the rain pounded the cloth roof and wind shook the whole world.  I didn't know what the hell to do now.

"Thank you," he finally said.  "This is much better."

"We can't stay here," I said.  Some part of my brain began to work again.  "Rain like this could cause flash flooding.  It's closer to my place than back to town."

"I am grateful for whatever sanctuary you can offer."

"Uh-huh."  I started the car.  The kitten made a sound of panic, but settled down in the next moment. Obviously used to traveling since once I started driving it made no protest.  My passenger waved his hand toward the crash as we passed.  The green glow disappeared.  In fact, glancing in the rearview mirror, I couldn't see any of the crash at all.

"Hey -- where'd it go?" I demanded.

"Still there," he said softly and laid his head back.  "Just not as noticeable."

"Well, that's probably good.  I don't want the guys in black crawling all over the area."

"You don't like black?" he asked, running his hand over that long cloak.

It turned a pretty, bright blue.

I started to speak but it really seemed kind of futile.

 

Things did not get better when we reached my house.  The storm grew in intensity and it came down, finally, to asking myself if sitting in the car was wise at all.

"Can you reach the front door on your own?" I asked.

"Yes, I think so," he said.  "Perhaps you should take Precious, though, in case I fall again."

He handed the little piece of grey fluff over to me and I pushed the kitten inside my jacket before I stepped out into the pounding rain.  My unexpected guest stumbled all the way to the front door but we got inside without any trouble.

As he looked around, I realized that this man (for want of a better term) was from another world.  I saw his eyes glance from the living room and loft bedroom, toward the kitchen to the right, bathroom to the left.  The place was littered with the odds and ends of mismatched furniture.  Papers and books lay scattered everywhere.  He looked back at me --

"Don't even say it."

"Pardon?" he asked, startled.

"How it's quaint or old-fashioned or primitive --"

"This is primitive?" he asked and looked around again.  He dabbed a corner of his cape at his bleeding forehead.  The light didn't help.  The blood wasn't quite red.

"Never mind.  Sit down before you fall over."

"Yes.  Good idea."

He reached the kitchen and settled on a much worn vinyl chair. I put the purring bundle of silver-colored fur on the table in front of him, and the kitten snuggled into his arm, blinking sleepily.  Darius and Medusa, my two cats, had climbed up on the back of the sofa and eyed us with true cat disdain.  Earl, I remembered, had decided to toss the cats outside the first time he arrived.  Darius had bit him.  Hard.

This visitor at least had an affinity for cats.  Or maybe it was something more.  He moved his hand hypnotically over the little furry forehead.

The kitten looked up at his companion.  "Meow."

"What did he say?" I asked, settling in the chair beside him.

"He said meow," the stranger replied.

"You don't communicate with him?"

"Communicate?  He's a cat.  What would he have to say to me?"

"I thought..." I stopped and shoved away all the horrible B-grade alien invasion movies I had ever seen. "Never mind what I thought.  He's very cute.  His name is Precious?"

"I don't know. I was just running down to Taco Bell and someone had tossed him out in the parking lot, poor little guy.  I couldn't leave him there.  I thought he'd behave, but he walked right across the control board.  Silly little cat, look what a mess you've gotten me into!  I'd be home by now if it wasn't for you!"

"Home to your wife and kids?" I mumbled, still trying to shape my thoughts about this alien.

"I'm a pilot.  We don't have any."

"Any what?" I asked, startled by the words.  My eyes started to drift down toward his lap.  I pulled them back with a start and a blush.

"Any wife and kids.  I'm sorry.  We seem to be having trouble communicating.  I obviously made a rude mistake.  I assumed English was your first language."

"I --" Take deep breaths, deep breaths.  Calm.  "I think I want some tea.  Would you care for some?"

"That would be wonderful.  Do you have orange pekoe?"

 

By the time I had the tea done he'd gone into the bathroom -- I didn't demand to know what he'd done in there -- petted both of my cats, and settled on the sofa with Precious Kitten in his lap.  I brought him a cup of tea and sat in the chair across from him.  Very nice and cozy with the storm raging outside.  Just the sort of weekend I'd imagined with Earl -- except Earl got bored if the TV wasn't on and playing some sports channel.

"My name's Millie," I offered.

"I'm Brad."

"Brad."

"Bradseline, but my friends call me Brad.  And the cats are?"

"Darius and Medusa."  Earl had never asked.  "How long have you been here?"

"About thirty-seven minutes." He looked up and grinned before I could say anything.  "Oh, you mean on Earth.  Eight days."

So, he had a sense of humor.  Ha. Ha.  "Is that something you should just tell people?"

"You're the one who asked.  And besides, It's not like I could lie to you about it.  You saw the crash.  I just hope that you're not going to try and sell the story or something stupid like that."

"You mean you aren't going to make me forget everything I've seen?"

"If you know a way I can do that, it would be really helpful."  He leaned back.  "I'm sorry I've had to inconvenience you like this.  I don't want to be a bother -- but I really need to contact someone to come and pick me up.  I don't suppose you have --"

A laser beam communicator?  A telepathic linkup?

"-- an Internet Connection?"

 

I pushed a second chair close to the desk so he could sit while I made the connection.  With the weather it could be iffy, and I had warned him that it might not work tonight -- but we got on-line without any trouble. I have my computer set to automatically launch my browser, email reader and my newsgroup reader.  They all came up, a half dozen messages flagged in one of the more volatile newsgroups that I love to read, Flower Genetics in the Real World.  The topic had long since diverged from anything even remotely resembling gardening, except that there was generally a lot of manure slung around.

"Genetics?" he asked, puzzled no doubt by the content of the first message, which had automatically opened and contained several references to a previous poster's poor verbal skills and lack of education.

"Never mind that.  They're silly people."

"Then why do you read it?"

"Because it amuses me," I said and quickly keyed the email reader up.  I had a new letter from my sister, a note from my best friend and seven spams, all promising to make my life better in one way or another.  Some of them rather interesting ideas, if I were a hermaphrodite.

"There you go.  Write away," I said slipping out of the chair.

He didn't ask me to leave, so I slid into the other chair and watched, telling myself it was just to make certain he got the note mailed off properly and everything.  Sure. If I had expected anything spectacular, I would have been disappointed again.  He addressed the note to Jotin with a bunch of numbers after the name.  The note was very short.

Hi Jot, it's me, your roommate.  I crashed in the desert outside Barstow.  A nice lady picked me up and brought me home (Yes, she KNOWS.)  Please come down here and get me before the holograph battery runs out of power and someone sees that piece of crap Star Skimmer I bought.  Follow the signal and look for the first house north on the road.  Let me know if you get this.  Thanks, Brad.

Off the note went and he sat back shaking his head.  "I don't know how long it'll take Jot to pick up his email.  Could be a couple hours.  Can you stay on-line that long?"

"Sure, no problem, as long as the power doesn't go out."  I thought about what we could do to entertain ourselves on-line for those two hours.  "Hey, how about if I show you my favorite newsgroups."

"Like the one about flower genetics?"

"Right."

 

The poor man was a newsgroup virgin.  He had no idea what was going on. The first time I said flamewar he asked about casualties and what sort of defense perimeter I had around the house.  I explained that  we used the word for a particularly nasty disagreement on-line.

The conversation sort of degenerated from there.

"So, he's really saying that the man's parentage is in question," Brad said, tapping the screen.  We were into the When to Water Cactus thread.  "He seems annoyed that the other one questioned his previous post.  I thought he posted so people could question him."

"Not Ninja Barfly.  He only wants to lecture and have people tell him how brilliant he is."

"Oh.  He must have said that in an earlier post.  Perhaps he should make mention of it again."

I let it go.  We were already getting in way over my head.  I didn't think I was qualified to teach an alien about human psychology.  I just nodded and he scrolled down to the next post from Mary Contrary.

This is very amusing guys.  LOL  :-) MaryC

"This is odd code," Brad said.  "Does she send secret messages?"

"LOL is shorthand for lots of laughs.  The other is a smiley face, one of the most loathsome cultural inventions of our time."

"Truly?"

"Truly."

"So... she thinks these other two, Ninja Barfly and John, are amusing?  I shouldn't take their disagreement seriously?"

"I'm sure they take it seriously, but the rest of us don't have to."

He shook his head and then put a hand to his forehead.  There was a spectacular bruise under a shock of bright blond hair.

"Are you all right?" I asked.

"Yes.  Just confused."  He scrolled down to the next note, one of the usual very short posts from PanPiper23.

ROFLMAO

"And this means?"  There was a slight current of hysteria in his voice.

"Roll on the floor laughing my ass off."

"Ah -- eee ---"

"It's just a saying.  Don't take it literally.  It means the person finds this exceedingly amusing."

"Then why didn't he say so, like John in his last post."

"John was amused?  I've never known John to be amused in the two years I've been reading this newsgroup."

"Here," he said, pulling back the post and tapping his finger on the screen.  "See.  Ha. Ha.  Very funny.  Why didn't PanPiper23 just write that instead?"

"John isn't amused at all, actually."

"But -- but -- he says he is!"

"No, not really.  You have to see the tone --"

"Tone?  There is no tone.  They're words on a screen!"

Yes, the hysteria had definitely started to settle in.  "Maybe we ought to call it a night, Brad.  I'm sure you've got a headache --"

"I didn't before this," he said.  But he opened the next message.  "There's only three more to go in this thread.  I want to see it to the end."

"It never ends.  There will be twenty-five more messages before dawn."

He sighed but started reading.  This message looked like a cryptic puzzle from hell.  Not only couldn't the person type three words without making a mistake, but he also littered the letter with slang and misspelled names.  It also didn't help that he was talking about something that had happened in an entirely different thread.  Even I had trouble following that one.

Then we were back to a post by Mary Contrary.

IIRC, the man in the other car denied ever having been in the location and it was proven that he could not have been since he was in prison at the time.  IOW, the news story was an outright fabrication.  IMHO, this has gone on long enough.  Have either of you considered moving on to a new subject?  Even the Enquirer has dropped this one by now.

"If I recall correctly, in other words, in my humble opinion.  And the Enquirer is --"

"A tabloid sold at supermarkets," he said.  "Everyone knows that."

"I'm sorry to hear it."

The penultimate message was about 1000 lines long: The Mother of All Posts, stretching back to the beginning of time.  It consisted of the original question and every reply; a continual accretion of lines that no one deleted, as if this was some holy text. Cultural anthropologists would one day study that message to show the evolution of language and habits on the Internet.  It would be a wonder to them.

For me, it was damned boring.  Brad read it all the way through, even the last three posts from John and Ninja Barfly that he had already read.  Finally we reached the bottom to which Sandi Sunshine had affixed her answer to this weighty tome of dissention.

Snarf.

Brad glanced my way.  He had a pathetically hopeful look in his face.

"Snarf," I said.  "It’s a sound of amusement."

"Amusement.  Snarf.  Sn-arf.  Snnnaaarfff."  He shook his head.  "Snarf-snarf-snarf-snarf-snarf."

I had a very hard time keeping a straight face.  He nearly had me -- well, ROFLMAO.  I just waved a hand at the screen and he went to the last letter.  It was another post from Mary.

Stop sending me emails.  Just ignore the last post.  I should know better than to interfere in your mighty discussion.  I must be having a blonde day.  MaryC

"Blonde day?"

I looked at Brad and his lovely long golden hair.

"Let's quit now," I suggested.

He didn't even argue.

We checked the email again, and found a note from his roommate.

Idiot.  I'll be there as early in the morning as I can.  I hope you were smart enough to pay a little extra and get the good insurance this time.  Jot

I tried not to feel disappointed that his friend would be by for him.  It was silly.  How the hell would I explain him to anyone else?  Hi -- I broke up with Earl and picked this up on my way home.

Some of my friends would have been damned envious, though.

 

Brad slept on the sofa, nestled between pillows, blankets, and one of my traitor cats.  Medusa liked him and even tolerated Precious.  I woke up several times during the night and looked down from my loft, just to make certain he was all right.  It wasn't that I doubted his existence.  Really.

Sometime about 8AM, I got up and fed the cats, including Precious, and made the toast and tea while Brad took a shower.  The weather didn't look much better than it had been the night before.  The rain had eased, but the wind whiped up sand in all directions, and the house groaned when the gusts hit.  I wouldn't be going anywhere today, but I suspected the weather wouldn't slow Jot down.

Brad arrived at the table with dripping blond hair.  I was getting used to that look.  The silver lamé had turned green today.  He thanked me for the toast and I had just settled the tea cozy on the table when someone pounded on the door.

We both assumed Jot had arrived, and Brad followed me when I went to answer it.  Imagine my surprise when I found Earl instead of another alien.  His eyes were puffy and he had a bandage across his nose.  Broken.  I belatedly remembered that part.

"What the hell are you doing here?" I demanded.  His car was parked next to mine.  I hadn't heard him coming, not in that wind.

"I came out -- who's he!"

"This is Brad.  Brad, this is my former fiancée, Earl the schmuck."

"Mr. Schmuck," Brad said with a nod.

"I don't think that's very funny, you stupid bastard.  Why don't you just step outside here where we can talk about it, man-to-man, asshole.  Or don't you have the balls?"

"Why are you people obsessed with my anatomy?" Brad asked.

I decided to take over the conversation before that one went any farther.  "You haven't told me what you're doing here, Earl."

"I gave you the night to calm down.  I thought I'd drive out here to give you a chance to apologize."

"I beg your pardon?"  I said, my voice very much calmer than my thoughts.

"There.  She apologized," Brad offered.  "Now I think she wants you to leave."

"I didn't apologize," I said.  "Never mind.  I'll explain it later.  Earl, get your fat ass off my land and never come back.  What made you think I would ever go back to you after that little scene with your other girlfriend?"

"She's not my girlfriend.  She's... my cousin."

"Well, when I showed up, you had your hands all over your nude cousin's breasts.  If she's one of your family, I really don't want to be part of it."

"I'll sue you for breach of promise!"  He waved his hand.  The ring was still there, the finger puffy.  "I'll sue you for my medical bills.  I'll --"

I slammed the door.  Missed his nose, but I think it might have broken his toe.  He hobbled away cursing and howling all the way.

Not a happy man.

"You were going to marry him?  He doesn't seem your type at all."

"No, he doesn't.  I'm glad that's over.  Let's drink our tea before it gets cold."

Jot showed up about ten minutes later.  He didn't look much like Brad -- no clones, then.  Another hallowed science fiction concept ruined.  Jot came to the door, mumbled a polite and shy hello to me, and then went back to wait at the door of his -- vehicle.  He'd parked the other side of my car, and it looked a little more spectacular than Earl's Saturn.

"Well," I said as he gathered up his blue cape and gray kitten.  "I really enjoyed meeting you."

"Thank you.  It was a very pleasant time, all things considered.  I -- come through this area about once a week.  Perhaps Precious and I could come and visit you again?"

I smiled.  A lot.  "Yes, that would be very nice."

"I have your email address.  I'll drop you a line when I get home."

"Great!"

He smiled as he left, waved before he got in the flying saucer with Jot.  It lifted up into the cloudy sky and headed back down the road toward the crash.  I hoped he came back soon.

 

Earl went to the police when he got back to town to report a UFO and a visit from aliens, who, according to him, stopped him on a back road and threatened bodily harm if he ever bothered his former girlfriend again.  People have been telling me for weeks how lucky I am for having broken up with the loon.

Brad has been by three times this month.  Amazing how fast Precious is growing!  We exchange email and he's even dropped into a couple of the newsgroups groups that I frequent.  He calls himself Alien327.  No one seems to know quite what to make of him.

There was another brief email from him tonight.

Hi!  I'll be there about noon tomorrow.  I found another set of those great anti-grav cat toys.  We'll see how long it takes Darius to destroy this pair -- I bought the set made of titanium.  Looking forward to seeing you.  Till later -- Brad.

P.S.  I got the attachment of blonde jokes.  ROTFLMAO 

Now that's something I'd like to see.

 

The End

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